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W.I.P. Mini Rainbow Dash by MoogleGurl

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This is a beautiful piece of work, and I see a great sculpture and a great artist, but perhaps (okay, if i offend you in any way, im sorry. first time writing a critique) you could have made the forehead slightly larger to bring out the look and style of the mane more. If you are aiming for show style, you can start putting you ears more on the sides of the head. the mane is kind of flat looking, and if it was more poofed it would look greatly similar to the actual rainbow dash. you could make the tail smoother so it is not as shaggy, and in my opinion the wings should be a bit smaller. Now, once again, sorry if you are offended, but this is stuff to take into consideration and become a better artist as you go along.
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